Friday, January 27, 2006

wide awake

frost bite
slowly thaws
prickling painfully
burning stinging
wide awake
and frozen

3 comments:

vjane said...
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KaliPamp said...

thanks Vjane.
i deleted the wrong comment when i realized too late that there was the spelling error.

"Hi Rika I like your words. these don't sound familiar. is this new writing?"

Vjane .

yes this is new. i have been reluctant to put it up. still with the stage fright.

rika